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steavenr
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0 posted 2006-01-28 12:27 PM


Why do I write the verses as they flow?
Should I worry when they no longer flow,
When my pen with ink no longer knows
And my thoughts languish in their growth?

Could I speak to hearts as once I could?
Songless in tongue and melodies that could
Raise the heart and soul to heaven’s goods
Welcoming sunshine rays as faultless moods

Woe to the speech that is weary, tired of creating a place
To relish the goodness of a turn, a phrase outside its place.
Praise to the minstrel who tells a tale of alluring spaces
And restful lolls, leaning on a heart’s embracing

Giving tranquility a home and thus creating
The next line for a poem, the next word worth creating
The thought for the thinking, an idea for the taking
Reminding us why. . .we write the words of our making.

© Copyright 2006 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2006-01-28 01:17 AM


Absolutely wonderful poem here!  Much enjoyed.   ....jo
jody5
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2 posted 2006-01-28 02:57 AM


This is elegantly exacuted and highly enjoyed. Standing ovation.


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-01-28 11:54 AM


"The thought for the thinking, an idea for the taking
Reminding us why. . .we write the words of our making."

~ Thank you, Dear Poet, for reminding me!

Loved your thoughts ~ and you expressed them so poetically!

Love, Light, and Poetry!
EA




RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2006-01-28 11:55 AM


We all run out of things to say but what we write afterwards is what we should of wrote before it comes and goes
wanderingin
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5 posted 2006-02-03 09:38 AM


very inspirational.... searching for a bit of your eloquence in word myslef!  Very nicely put.
LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-02-03 11:24 AM


can't speak for anyone else, but you certainly do not only speak to my heart, but place a song there as well...

this was quit a marvelous write and journey

steavenr
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7 posted 2006-02-03 12:29 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments...was really just playing with a non-traditional rhyme scheme...like hanging clothes on skeleton...doesn't always fit just right...but, thank you all for taking the time to read and comment. Greatly appreciated.
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