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Open Poetry #37

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jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-01-27 07:04 PM

Don't be sad for me...
It was time for me to be happy.
I want you to be joyous too!
Have a party, rejoyce.
From pain I am now free.
Accept your loss.
Know there are replacements
To fill you emptiness with.
Growth is the blessing of death's sting.
Notice the posative impacts upon life.
Don't give up because you are alone,
Start making new dreams alive!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2006-01-28 12:06 PM

Enjoyed...a part of living is death...James

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

2 posted 2006-01-28 12:10 PM

Thanks James I learned that too.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-01-28 01:18 AM

Well done and the title is a good choice, too.

...jo

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-01-28 01:29 AM

Thank you Jo. I lost 7 friends in 2 years once and as a consequence I read alot of books on life after death. I also read Elizabeth K Ross's book on death and dying. That is where the I came up with the name for this poem. Plus many cultures have a party when someone dies. Glad you liked it. Kim

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2006-01-28 05:04 AM

To celebrate ones life once they are gone, is the best compliment you can give them.

I enjoyed.

Hugs Fee

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