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...Melting...
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...Melting... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. I was perfectly suspended in winter's isolation ~ wrapped in my body's warmth, secure in my own keeping… and you perfect in your condition.. both of us poised toward each other, frozen in our certainty and having known exactly what it was to be cold and separate and sure.. we chose to melt. . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetEnchantress~ I adore the imagery of the melt~ *sigh* ... this is just plain purtimous! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So Cool! Enjoyed this write especially! TD |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
you just get better arthur |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh! This is great, Nancy! A keeper. ...jo |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
The content is good. I reccomend perhaps defining what you're going to use as capitalization, and punctuation. More a mechanics thing than anything else. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Wow I like the way the last line brings this whole poem together. It's beautiful. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Ok, you can just mop me up off the floor, this melted my heart. Perfectly expressed..... Biggest of Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I melted...great poetry Nancy - Paul |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully romantic Tinker. Melting with the heat of love's committment. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You wrote this just beautiful. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Looks like you have melted all of us. Excellent poem. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Please Don,t Melt,short and sweet poem.paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I was perfectly" ~ Actually, you ARE poetically perfect! You write some of the most captivating love vignettes that I have ever had the privilege of reading!  Time stands still when I read your poetry! Hugs with love, Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent! Loaded with possibilities of meaning, But I think I know why you melted..  I always enjoy your poetry. ______ _____ice ><> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful to read you...this morning M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~Thank you all so very much for your wonderful replies~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I'm melting just in the visualization... Neat poem, Nancy! miscellanea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
terrific write. I enjoyed it muchly. if thats a word... cheye xx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Stunning! Excellent! Perfect! - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, and enchanting too, Enchantress! - Owl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love it!! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Nancy, this is sooooooooo romantic and tender it made me cry, as the poem is absolutely gorgeous and gleaming with unconditional love and devotion, and it is a feeling I long to feel ever so much in making my dream girl's heart melt! (wipes tear) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
aye poetess melting is king make 'melt' your friend today |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Enchanting lovescape..and a great punchline. You do these so well. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So glad this was chosen to float to the top again... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
On, Nancy, How could anybody be ice around you, Dear Heart? This is such a smile and makes me think how wonderful it is that we can choose to radiate! Hugs,  Karen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I would have sworn I'd responded to this... does mental applause count? *S* Beautiful write, dear lady! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Perfection in every way ~ you make this hopeless romantic melt. I absolutely adore this - Simple and beautiful, it's a keeper Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
beautiful change of direction |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm also glad that this floated to the top again. How very much we miss in the rush of daily life. Lovely write and a pleasure to read! |
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