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Fee
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2006-01-27 06:19 AM


My every thought
My every breath
My every reason

He is truly

The reason my heart beats.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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1 posted 2006-01-27 06:55 AM


Dear Fee, I hope he knows this and feels very very lucky.

Enjoyed the read and emotion.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-01-27 07:20 AM


love is a marvelous reason to live, adding, how magically love brightens one's life, with or without a partner..love shines where ever one may go.

Nice write

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-01-27 09:54 AM


Your love and adoration for this man literally leapt off the page! He is a very fortunate man to have captured a heart as sweet ~ and exuberant! ~ as yours!

May your heart beat forever!

Warm hug and a broad smile,
EA

RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2006-01-27 10:19 AM


simple to the point always were the way to the heart
HopeS
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5 posted 2006-01-27 10:31 AM


Lost most beautifully expressed

Hope

Larry C
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6 posted 2006-01-27 01:31 PM


Fee,
So I didn't need biology classes at all! And he's a lucky guy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2006-01-28 12:01 PM


Enjoyed...James
Balladeer
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8 posted 2006-01-28 12:18 PM


It's the nicest poem anyone has ever written about me!
iliana
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9 posted 2006-01-28 01:14 AM


giggling a Balladeer's remark.  That special one you're referring to hear must know it, too!
Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2006-01-28 05:00 AM


Thank you all so much for your loving words and comments.

The man I wrote this about has captivated my heart and soul and will hold it forever,

"Hmmm and I didn't even need to put your name on it Balladeer" Lol..... I guess I will have to write one just for you.

Warmest hugs to all, Fee


Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

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