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Huan Yi
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No preacher
Teacher
Or how to do manual
Could have made her

It is only natural
That she should glide into a store
And leave it more than it was before her

That even now
With the sun gone down
Below the horizon line
Still a glow limns the silent air

And what was less
In common nature
Should be lifted to the heart


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playing.with.crayons
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1 posted 01-27-2006 01:07 AM       View Profile for playing.with.crayons   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for playing.with.crayons

"No preacher
Teacher
Or how to do manual
Could have made her

It is only natural
That she should glide into a store
And leave it more than it was before her"

loved this. You add line breaks brilliantly.
my compliments. xxxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

The Lady
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Delicious.

Drauntz
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I wonder how you write icecream store.

beautiful, truly.
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