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Open Poetry #37

Delicate is the Rose

EagletonDiva
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since 2006-01-11

Posts 107

0 posted 2006-01-26 04:22 PM

Delicate is the rose you hold in your hand
Fragile is the heart within its stem
Sharp is the thorn that lives at its side
Troubled emotions it tries to hide

Soft is the fragrance lingering in the air
Tender is the petal longing to care
Frightened is the love which lives in its mind
Gentle is the touch to use with this kind

Innocent is the color so full of life
Jagged is the leaf like the edge of a knife
Patient is the dream to have with this man
For delicate is the rose you have in your hand

Written by Lyn EagletonMay 10, 1990

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-01-26 04:34 PM

Lovely words, lovely time. Joyce

jody5
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since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

2 posted 2006-01-26 04:49 PM

Really liked this write. It was executed so well and with perfect form. Standing ovation.

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

3 posted 2006-01-26 05:13 PM

me personally i never had any Patience for waiting i seen to get lost in the mins and it seems like hours it goes on and on and on and then the gift is at the end and gone just in a second

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-01-26 07:16 PM

Enjoyed...James

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-01-27 12:05 PM

Lovely.

Fee
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since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2006-01-27 06:27 AM

Very sweet.

Hugs, Fee

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2006-01-27 07:24 AM

wonderfully written

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

8 posted 2006-01-27 09:47 AM

Lovely

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