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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-01-25 05:30 PM



Someday I wish to be the all,
that someone's to appeal,
where words aren't minced
and timeless seems to end forsaken feel

When moments run into another,
the kind that spark the flame
and take me to a different world
where I don't assume the blame

Where everything is filled with sounds
of softness and its touch
Where dreams are kept in balance
and their meanings meaning much

Where holding really holds the warmth
and kissing steals the might.
If only words could come alive
and end this day tonight

The obvious would show its face
and journey me to sleep
To be that someone's time in hold
a dream within to keep...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Larry C
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1 posted 2006-01-25 05:55 PM


That day's comin' sweet M.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-01-25 07:36 PM


MzBliss~

'Where dreams are kept in balance
and their meanings meaning much'


When you get there (and you will) ... send me a postcard that says, "Wish you were here."
... for I would like to join ya' gal~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

openthoughts
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Where the child can be free
3 posted 2006-01-25 07:46 PM


Your not the only who wishes for something else...something different

A poem that definitly hit home

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2006-01-25 08:55 PM


I sure understand this. I have the same wish.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2006-02-20 04:47 PM


Thank you Larry, even if the day isn't coming, I will survive.


Marge if I ever get there I will invite you to join me  

openthoughts, oh I don't wish for something else...just for a deeper connection and understanding of what I have.


Sue, someday it will happen
Till then..

M
  




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