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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-01-25 01:30 PM





A Slip of Poem…

Unlike a fragrant
Ladyslipper,
A slip of poem
Will not perish…

It travels simply,
Whether in one’s pocket,
Or heart,
And is reminisced easily
In one’s mind.

A slip of poem
Brings with it
Tender thoughts,
And winsome wonderings

It can be a gift,
Or solace
It can speak for
One’s mind

Leaving nothing to the
Imagination

Or tell of love
Unrequited

A slip of poem
Can be an introduction
Or a goodbye.

More than a hallmark,
It is knowing
That one cared enough
To pen the very best…

And this is why
I care to leave
A slip of poem,

for you.

~*~



© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-25 01:33 PM


I am so pleased that this slip of a poem did not slip by me! You wrote well of what you know well!

Love & Sun Light,
Linda



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2 posted 2006-01-25 01:45 PM


Karilea~
Lovely little sentiments from you in this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-01-25 02:10 PM


Sissie

"And this is why
I care to leave
A slip of poem,

for you."

And you care more than so many.  Thank you for this!  

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4 posted 2006-01-25 02:46 PM


Hugging you SIL, for the special sentiment in this....you're one of my heroines, you know! ...jo
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5 posted 2006-01-25 02:48 PM


This is indeed lovely Karilea.

*I need a hug*

Love ya lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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6 posted 2006-01-25 02:58 PM


I loved your "slip of a poem".  Proof inded that mere slips have something to say.  Love, Joyce
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7 posted 2006-01-25 03:38 PM




A beautiful little slip of a poem.



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8 posted 2006-01-25 03:46 PM


Your slips will last long after our children are gone form this world and their childrens children
Ruth

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9 posted 2006-01-25 09:04 PM


This is just simply beautiful.
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10 posted 2006-01-25 10:37 PM


A lovely poem, whether penned for one or as a happy thought for all...

Speaking of lovely, I do like that picture -- it's precious, really catches your sparkle!

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11 posted 2006-01-26 09:44 AM


It travels simply,
Whether in one’s pocket,
Or heart,
And is reminisced easily
In one’s mind.

To read this today is extra special... for as I was coming to work this morning, I was thinking about little verses that made such impact on my life... and are remembered decades later. *S*

This is absolutely lovely, Sunshiney One!

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12 posted 2006-01-26 05:55 PM


agreeing with all before me~~~
I like when your slips are showing

M

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13 posted 2006-01-26 08:44 PM


a beautiful slipping Kari  
This is a wonderful write from our sunnyladyperson...  

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14 posted 2006-01-27 07:31 AM


Beautiful!!!
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15 posted 2006-01-27 04:29 PM


oh I do love this...such a seemingly simple sentiment, but in reality running deep and true to your heart
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16 posted 2006-01-27 05:22 PM


The repetition was amazing.  It's not often that I encounter any that works very well.  The message is great- I know exactly what you're talking about.  My english teacher conveys this to us through everything we do, and I thank him, just as I thank you for reminding all of us of this.
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17 posted 2006-01-29 09:26 AM


~And this is why
I care to leave
A slip of poem,

for you.~

Just what I needed today, a slip of poem, thank you for sharing, dear caring lady.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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