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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
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0 posted 2006-01-25 09:30 AM



Come back again,
when you're good and ready,
because you know I wait,
secluded,
angry at the world,
or you,
or both,
but then again, they're the same,
so which is it?

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-01-25 09:42 AM


Sounds as though you feel that person is your whole world ~ and that your world has suddenly up and left you ~ leaving you in a state of disbelief and anger.

I hope that that person is worthy of your waiting.

Sending you a big, understanding, loving hug,
EA

DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
Posts 82
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2006-01-26 07:14 PM


Yeah.. this write was pretty simple to figure out. Wrote it mostly to get it off my chest, felt good to put it out there, and it sums up exactly how I felt. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the hug lol.
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