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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-01-25 07:43 AM



today is the other pair of shoes
the lace up kind
too big for the wings

of the inverted angels
who jilled their evenings off
with the gloves of loud sleeves

and some sipping jack's caffeine
no need for jackets tepid
at the dancing man's store

junk yard chapel's restrictions
with the sand bag jesus
and row boats with song books

while jimi still plays his guitar
with no strings attached
and the kitty girls watch his skin

just before he shows them heaven
from the smooth side of psalms
and collects their quiet time

as offerings of million night martyrdom


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scribblenote: day after the starbucks sponsered shopping mall tent revival life improvement symposium getaway luncheon with free palm reading and french press tutorials..

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-01-25 08:26 AM



The scribble note
could have been poem enough...

but the imagery
is etched now...
behind the eyelids
where the smells are...

wonderful.

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Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2006-01-25 08:34 AM


Got to love Starbucks...

hmmmm..starbucks...

Morning Mr. D!

lovely breakfast of words you offer...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-01-25 08:49 AM


ms sun thank you lady friend for the read..kinjibi blend I think it was..

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ms susanc...a little cluster of yuppieville structures just seeping wholy ground sinsations..thanks lady

Martie
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4 posted 2006-01-25 12:58 PM


DS

You see into things...and find more then others would ever know.  I'm glad you share your vision here!  

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-01-25 02:00 PM


ms martie..thanks little neighbor..the prozac just keeps me looking deeper  (grinz)
always a treat to be blessed with your vizzits

Cloud 9
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6 posted 2006-01-25 05:03 PM


There are mornings you are better than Starbucks.
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-01-25 05:12 PM


ms nine..hmmmmmmmm dayyyymnn...I must work to improve those other mornings...thanks lady for the eyes here
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8 posted 2006-01-25 10:20 PM


Well...that is one way to put the fire out -- and a fine one, I might add!

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