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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 01-24-2006 05:12 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


So you’ve lost some weight
And changed your hair

And now I imagine
We’re supposed to follow you
Wherever you go

But see old girl the real world
Was never like that at all

Not back then
When we were young
And even much less now

With too much known
To be taken in
Under what little is left
Of the moon


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The Lady
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1 posted 01-24-2006 05:49 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


Excellent work.

RedStoneEB
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2 posted 01-25-2006 05:34 AM       View Profile for RedStoneEB   Email RedStoneEB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RedStoneEB's Home Page   View IP for RedStoneEB

alot has changed i wouldnt mind living in the arranged marriage era where young females got married to a certain type of man and it was just great i'm guessing
Drauntz
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3 posted 04-23-2007 01:38 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

for whatever the reason, this is so very good and make me laugh.

very good and funny. Your seriousnes does not bother me.

enjoyed.
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