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Clayton Avenue

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-24-2006 01:18 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


So much snow
Upon the ground

Light without heat
Or nourishment
On leafless trees

How many words weve heard
Over all these years

Rippled waters of a river
Passing under a wooden bridge


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steavenr
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1 posted 01-25-2006 01:31 AM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

I don't quite understand why this one has been commented on...but you have crafted this one very carefully...and like the deafening effect of a heavy snow...so are the words of our lives...interesting and thought provoking write...
RedStoneEB
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Reminds me of a complex japanese/chinese poem using nature as its course of action rather than the wording of others
Drauntz
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"Rippled waters of a river
Passing under a wooden bridge"

can not ignore this.... Rippled water means spring, wooden bridge means warm.. you have been use iron bridge before or after.

beautiful poems. hope!
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