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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-01-24 12:55 PM



Possibilities Are Found

We can share together
Find dreams any time
Which do you suggest
In your place or mine

We can take it in turns
Whatever you desire
I could share with you
Aside a cosy log fire

We can land anywhere
In our dream destiny
I have the ocean view  
Here beside the sea

We can extend dreams
Reach far off shores
Dreams we can travel
To my place or yours

We can be there forever
Having no limitations
Conveying possibilities
In dream destinations


Hope ©2006

Link to the poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/95/poem_811972.html


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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2006-01-28 12:33 PM


I looked at this three times, and I am in awe of the following lines:

"Conveying possibilities
In dream destinations"

don't understand why this one doesn't have a whole bunch of comments...let's send it back up...am sure it got missed...

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-01-28 01:11 AM


This is lovely, Hope!  Good to read you; and I'm glad this one popped up.   ...jo
Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2006-01-28 05:07 AM


You got me with the invite to sit by the fire.

When your with a friend, it does not matter who's place, because it is the company that makes it worth while.

Nicely written.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2006-01-28 08:18 AM


We can be there forever
Having no limitations
Conveying possibilities
In dream destinations


nicely expressed Hope...

possibilities always have to be left open

M

Katerie
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since 2006-01-27
Posts 92
Central New York
5 posted 2006-01-28 09:08 AM


Yeah, very nicely expressed, and eloquently written.  
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