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Move Inside. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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What is it? That cries within? A spark lit, prelude to begin. A being inside, music moves him, no love to hide, pride to the brim. Simple but free, beauty bathes, coruscating, from inside, look, see, sun in Eden shining. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice imagery...had to look up coruscating, and it fits the theme of the poem so intricately... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling at your flash of brilliance |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
The soul is the light of us all constantly glowing and connects us all to each other |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely words and thoughts, Phil  M |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your heart shines ever so bright~ beaming across the miles~shinning, leading me to the answers that I seek, the love that I know. ~ARH  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eden's sun shines forth from you through your brilliant poetry!   Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Man before the fall -- we all can get there again! Nice write, GoldenRose. ...jo |
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