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JaredLee777 New Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 2 |
Boxers lunge forward at the sound of the bell Misting sweat looms above the fighters with a pungent smell Swollen muscles bulge form their shoulders Rock-hard gloves slide off the jaw like tremendous boulders Devastating blows to the jaw seem endless to the eye Mouth pieces ejected from the mouth, I tell no lie Blood streaming from the mouth, it doesn’t seem right Insurmountable pain seethes through his body at the end of the fight |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Very descriptive writing, here. Sounds as though it doesn't end until the pain sets in. Would you be telling the brutal truth here? Enjoyed the read, and again, I was struck by the graphic descriptions. Shenachie |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Pip!! Loved the detail in this.. I recently have been looking into boxing (at least getting the training) very expensive..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Powerful images in your entrance post. I know you will enjoy it here. Please check your email for a special Passion's greeting.  In the midst of winter, |
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