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As You Look Inside Me
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As You Look Inside Me |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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It seems as though you see me inside Way down deep where my soul abides Or into my mind where inner thoughts dwell My words you seem to know before them I tell This unusual connection we have between Becomes more amazing as each new day is seen Time after time these things come to be While looking, into my inner being you seem to see Yet, as I wonder how could occur these things My heart very gladly a love song sings For it takes enormous love, this much to care To feel, to see, our inner beings to share Though at times I am startled of how you are knowing Of my thoughts and actions before they are showing Yet, I am truly glad we are this close in our hearts And I am hoping this closeness never, ever departs ~*~ |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely  so sweet and wonderful, I hope it lasts forever Julie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A Love Like Yours & Gary's Will Last Into Forevermore So mote it be! With much love & affection,  Thank you for this gift.  |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
This is so beautiful, it is like you have taken thoughts from my own mind and written them so I can read. Thank you... Warmest Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
p.s, adding this one to my library :-) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you all so very much for reading and replying to mmy poem. this one means a lot to me. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ethel, So nicely done. And what a gift to share so deep.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and you girls thought only you could read minds or be in tune with ya! Got news for you... Well done Ethel... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When one looks this deep, m'friend... there's never any way out. |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Very beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You always look so pretty in love, Ethel! ....jo |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
such a beautiful poem. to beautiful for words to express. a graet write thank you for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How did I ever miss this one!!?? Excellent Ethel...very special indeed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Very powerful. Well done. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you all so very much for your sweet replies. I appreciate all of you. Hugs, Ethel  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful love poem, Ethel...one of my favorites now of yours~~ M |
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