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Sharksbean
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0 posted 2006-01-23 03:49 PM



The angel who stole my heart
i've loved her from the very start
when i look into her eyes
they have an ocean of beauty inside

Her voice for music
brings joy to my heart
i hope for us to be together one day
and never have to part ways

When she is in emotional pain
i feel it ten times as much
it makes me want to break down and cry
i love her so very much

This angel is precious to me
more dear to me than the world
she is a major blessing
for which my gratitude is un-ending

Just a gentle hug from her
takes away the week's burden
just listening to her talk
takes away all my suffering

this angel stole my heart
and i give it to her to keep
i know it is safe in her hands
for she tends it with care so sweet


-may the force be with you in poetry

[This message has been edited by Sharksbean (01-23-2006 04:45 PM).]

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White Wolf
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1 posted 2006-01-23 04:24 PM



I really liked this one.  It is great.


If you are looking for meaning in life, stop.  It will find you.

If you are not looking, start. It is out there waiting for you.

[This message has been edited by White Wolf (01-23-2006 09:19 PM).]

garysgirl
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2 posted 2006-01-23 04:44 PM


I love this poem. I'll bet she does too.
My Honey-bear tells me things like this and writes
poems for me too. It does make a woman feel so special.
Hugs,
Ethel

Sharksbean
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3 posted 2006-01-23 04:48 PM


thank you for for the compliment garysgirl i appreciate that. and i only wish that she would give su a chance. but as it is we can only be friends. half of me takes comfort inn that and the other half... well let's just say the other half is holding together as best it can
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-01-23 06:04 PM


Methinks I know who the angel be...You know who I think it is...and she is an angel, indeed. Some of the best loves start off as friendships. Enjoy what you have and go with the flow.

A love like yours is very special and the angel whose heart you will one day win, is going to be a very fortunate cherub!

This poem is a beautiful expression of your gentle and caring soul. She can not help but be touched by this poem. ~ I was...

May you be loved as you deserved to be. Life is exciting and we never know who we'll find 'round the bend!

Keep your heart ~ and eyes ~ open!

God bless you and the angel that you love,


EA

Sharksbean
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5 posted 2006-01-24 02:32 PM


thank you earthangel your words mean a lot to me
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