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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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in the age before sin i lived with gods and mutes upon the hill there the first truth tasted , poisoned fruit the first of many deaths |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A lot to be said for "silence is golden," huh. You've painted the true feel of innocence in the first part of this..."gods and mutes." And in the second part, the bitter bite of losing it. Saving both of yours tonight, Raph.  ...jo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh I adore this one, very nice write Raph. Nice and sharp. Makes me wonder if one would rather live with bliss or live with many deaths and gain insight and have pain. The eternal question, yes? Love to see you writing. Miss it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, Bello...this is brilliant it's a shame we lose it the hard way wuv wu m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Are you ever on a roll, Raph!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks jo, silence can also be another form of torture sue, no question give me bliss..let me bleat with the other sheep in denial and ignorance...sighs...ahem..im fine thanks bella, that it is. wuv wu megs, sometimes anger is a gift |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Succinct and powerful! I like your style. Shenachie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
bahh - hhhhhhhhh . . . *just watch the steep rocky crags* |
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