i dreamed the dream of you

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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2006-01-22 04:20 PM

A single memory remained
it twisted in and out-
the mind, like a voice calling, wakes suddenly
wide eyed - wondering! Its visions of thee,
And on that thought…a smile stays
touched into place, yet it was made by fingertips:
Brushed with the coldness of fantasy
the eyes longing to close to dream again…

Thou art dancing in the snow covered field,
Thee promised me, to the place,
And the snowflakes melted slowly, before
they hit our parted lips ready to kiss;
Watered passion were teardrops upon me
In the room which waits for my waking,
Seems my heart hath melted this dream
and thee stands alone in thy winter world!..

So frail these memories, sweet thoughts, thee,
As if by bitter chance – they might fail to be
The ghost of thy form leaves me wondering,
Concealing thee beneath the unbreakable soul.
O touch me, and keep my smile warm
compared to what is not the closed eyed world
I’d rather die in this dream of old!
And kiss upon old times spend and sold.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2006-01-22 04:33 PM

lovely

-juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-01-24 06:06 PM

Enjoyed...James

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2006-01-25 08:39 AM

RedStone,

I love the sincerity and sensitivity that comes alive in your writing.

~miscellanea~

So frail these memories, sweet thoughts, thee,
As if by bitter chance – they might fail to be
The ghost of thy form leaves me wondering,
Concealing thee beneath the unbreakable soul.
O touch me, and keep my smile warm
compared to what is not the closed eyed world
I’d rather die in this dream of old!
And kiss upon old times spend and sold.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-01-25 08:47 AM

My goodness! The delicate, tender-heartedness of this graceful poem of love, has left me breathless!

An exceptionally fine write!

Linda

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2006-01-25 11:08 AM

O touch me, and keep my smile warm

Heart felt thoughts above.
I enjoyed reading this.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-01-25 04:06 PM

"And the snowflakes melted slowly, before
they hit our parted lips ready to kiss"

Lovely poem Lee.

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