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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-22 04:06 PM




On a rainbow colours transformed a need to not understand but to consider what I was stopping

That had so much magic

Why was I stopping that magic

What could I gain

Apart from oblivioun

A lack of knowledge of everything I never knew

Dave Page

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2006-01-22 09:36 PM


I love this...and don't stop the magic
Let it work.
Hugs,
Ethel

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2 posted 2006-01-22 09:48 PM


Well done Dave..
This piece is

Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-01-22 09:50 PM


probably will become one of my favorite Davewrites
froggy
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4 posted 2006-01-23 11:47 AM



  Wonderful read

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

MGROVES
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5 posted 2006-01-31 03:21 AM


nice dave

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

miscellanea
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6 posted 2006-01-31 05:49 AM


I have a tendency to want to rearrange furniture and things, and after I have, I find I want to place to back exactly where
it was!  To rearrange or stop the magic of a
rainbow...Certainly got my attention with this, Dave.  Excellent analogy.  It's good to see your work again.

miscellanea

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2006-01-31 07:08 AM


I am always thinking about what I dont understand...I figure there is a reason for it and stop trying ~~


M

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8 posted 2006-01-31 07:36 AM


You write such intriguing, thought-provoking poetry, Dear Philosopher!

You are always thinking and a pondering ~ and thankfully, sharing!

This is one of my favourite, Davisms!


Linda

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
9 posted 2006-01-31 03:22 PM



I felt I wrote everything I didn't understand, was frightened of but lacked the understand to understand

This piece is  

Hugs~Nancy
In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Yes dave

Midnitesun
2006 09:50 PM                        Inappropriate content?

probably will become one of my favorite Davewrites  

I hope what will be "gently" will have a place as well:

As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand softly ruffling hairs on the back of my hand as you passed in a breath of wind touching a breath as you never turned leaving vapours entire in a fragment of philosphy woven

froggy
          
  Wonderful read - gentle is for you as well

:-)
Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

MGROVES

Marsha

I have so little time because time unless earning doesn't pay a mortgage.

I wish I had to time to write more

Dave

nice dave
My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~



miscellanea

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I have a tendency to want to rearrange furniture and things, and after I have, I find I want to place to back exactly where
it was!  To rearrange or stop the magic of a
rainbow...Certainly got my attention with this, Dave.  Excellent analogy.  It's good to see your work again.

miscellanea  

It is good to read your words as well

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

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I am always thinking about what I dont understand...I figure there is a reason for it and stop trying ~~

Naked

You always understand too much and I think at times you consider it wrong.

From a high place does my mind blind that I should not see what transcends and teaches

Dave

M  


Earth Angel


You write such intriguing, thought-provoking poetry, Dear Philosopher!

You are always thinking and a pondering ~ and thankfully, sharing!

This is one of my favourite, Davisms!


Linda  

Linda

You honour me

Dave


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