Suck it up II (for Skyfire)

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Open Poetry #37

Suck it up II (for Skyfire)

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-01-22 01:43 PM

Oh really Harry . . .
Your maudlin poor me poetry
Is just too much

All this stuff about broken heart
Tortured soul all because a girl you knew
Wouldn’t come around . . .

I know for sure it pleases you
To walk in black and salt the wound

But show respect for intellect
Try hard to be a man

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2006-01-22 04:00 PM

Fantastic! Thank you!

and then He created the horse...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-01-22 11:47 PM

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-01-23 12:13 PM

I love this one too!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2006-01-23 07:05 PM

YES!! Absolutley love this one John!

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

5 posted 2006-01-24 02:38 AM

Too right, John! I really gotta stop all that misery mongering. I'm done with the sackcloth and ashes. No longer picking scabs....

Lesson learned.

Smiling here!

The "Harry" Shenachie

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-23 01:20 PM

intellect is for math
Intense tears is for poem

good laugh.

may someday you write a poem with torrent of tears between the lines.

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