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Suck it up II (for Skyfire)

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-22-2006 01:43 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Oh really Harry . . .
Your maudlin poor me poetry
Is just too much

All this stuff about broken heart
Tortured soul all because a girl you knew
Wouldn’t come around . . .

I know for sure it pleases you
To walk in black and salt the wound

But show respect for intellect
Try hard to be a man


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1 posted 01-22-2006 04:00 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Fantastic! Thank you!

and then He created the horse...

Midnitesun
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2 posted 01-22-2006 11:47 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

The Lady
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3 posted 01-23-2006 12:13 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


I love this one too!


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 01-23-2006 07:05 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

YES!! Absolutley love this one John!
Bridget Shenachie
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5 posted 01-24-2006 02:38 AM       View Profile for Bridget Shenachie   Email Bridget Shenachie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bridget Shenachie

Too right, John!  I really gotta stop all that misery mongering.  I'm done with the sackcloth and ashes.  No longer picking scabs....

Lesson learned.

Smiling here!

The "Harry" Shenachie
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6 posted 04-23-2007 01:20 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

intellect is for math
Intense tears is for poem

good laugh.

may someday you write a poem with  torrent of tears between the lines.
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