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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-01-22 11:35 AM



I walk the thoughts off,
mile after mile,
calorie after calorie,
trying to figure out the changes in me
that really haven't,
but appear so to others.

The exercise is futile,
everything remains the same
except time.

It's my personal world clock
ticking away the phases of my life,
inking me into oblivion,
losing myself beyond repair.

You are the guardian of my heart,
shadowing my every move,
holding back
"life complete"...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-01-22 10:20 PM


wanna go for a five miler with me?
only rule? it's gotta be in the mountains, at the beach, or in the parks, fields or along a lake...NOT on the city streets, which are not conducive to positive thoughts (My not-so-humble Opinion)

iliana
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2 posted 2006-01-22 11:12 PM


"It's my personal world clock
ticking away the phases of my life,"

I know that clock, Maureen...all too well.   ....jo

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Riding
3 posted 2006-01-23 03:27 PM


"It's my personal world clock
ticking away the phases of my life,
inking me into oblivion,
losing myself beyond repair."

Don't I know this...

and then He created the horse...

garysgirl
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4 posted 2006-01-23 04:55 PM


And oh, my Lord, Maureen!!
I know that ticking clock too!!

A very good poem, Sweet M.
Hugs,
Ethel

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