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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-22 11:28 AM


Will she start I ask myself
Filthy as she is
Berries somewhere touched away
I parked under the hood

Driving at manic speeds because I dont want the fool
Bunched into flows
And I am clear
Until

Arriving after hours
Car full to the brim
A portable house
But without showers that shim in essence

Been there so long
Security makes my tea
Gives me a hand with my stuff
And does it

All for free

Quick punt for the North Wigan PremierLodge

Dave

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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
1 posted 2006-01-22 11:33 AM


Good Morning Dave,
  Enjoyed the read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-01-22 03:08 PM


Still night for me

Should have left hours ago

Take care Ella

Dave

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california
3 posted 2006-02-06 03:32 AM


enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

HopeS
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4 posted 2006-02-06 11:54 AM


Wonderful description of your travels , how is Wigan these days

Hope

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-02-06 05:52 PM




"Been there so long
Security makes my tea"

Fine line... fine poem.


iliana
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6 posted 2006-02-06 06:36 PM


I had a car like that once...much enjoyed.
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