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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-01-21 11:33 PM



~Laughing
out loud, I am
The very nerve of a
very stubborn muse-in-refuse
of wearing the ink of my own choosing
How dare that little daredevil
look at me in soft plead
Two-faced,she is
laughing
knowing full-well
that I am Marge-in-charge
she only exists through my ink
does she really think that she can dictate
poetic fall to the blue page
How dare she be so bold
as to stand there
laughing
so totally
rebellious is that minx
shaking her little quill at me
saying, "Catch me if you can, Poetess."
Scurrying off in word pursuit
chasing fortune and fame
Again, I am
laughing~


Foreverly Yours Ink
~*Marge Tindal*~
Copyright 2006

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-01-21 11:36 PM


Marge/sis.....She sounds just like mine.  Or maybe mind has been hanging out with yours.  Tell her to come home!!  Loved this, of course!  
HopeS
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2 posted 2006-01-22 12:09 PM


This was so cute and amusing , I have a stubborn muse that I ask to flow and it  keeps refusing

Hope

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3 posted 2006-01-22 01:19 AM


Brilliant!  Marge, this is outstanding!   ...jo
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4 posted 2006-01-22 02:22 AM


wonderful Margie~
talk about giggle when I read this, they must all be the same, playing games and trying to take the upper hand
delightful penning my friend.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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5 posted 2006-01-22 04:38 AM


What beautiful rictameters these are, Marge!!
I love the way you do these, lady!! You
make them blend together so perfectly!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2006-01-22 08:42 AM


Marge you make it look so easy..
If my muse is down there with yours,
please send her home..
AFTER yours gives mine a few lessons.
Excellent!!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Betty
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7 posted 2006-01-22 09:03 AM


This is so adorable Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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8 posted 2006-01-22 10:32 AM


It’s always a pleasure to read perfect poetry- job well done.

Thanks, Melton

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9 posted 2006-01-22 10:39 AM


Marge,
It gave me a chuckle too, enjoyed.

Bodger
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10 posted 2006-01-22 11:15 AM


Beautiful
Dave

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11 posted 2006-01-22 11:23 AM


~smiling~ at you this morning


M

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12 posted 2006-01-22 11:30 AM


good read
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13 posted 2006-01-22 03:22 PM


Dear Marge:

Really an amusing write! No muse can esacape you for long!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2006-01-22 04:29 PM


cute!
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15 posted 2006-01-24 10:16 AM


heehee!  laughing, me, too!!  

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2006-01-24 10:27 AM



Thanks everyone ... out of all my little muses, this one is the most insistent in trying to control my quill~

Her name is Blesaka ... and when she starts traipsing through my ink ...
I never know where we're going to end up~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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17 posted 2006-01-24 02:05 PM


Blesaka must now surely know that Marge is in charge and has the last laugh! lol

Delightful read!


EO


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18 posted 2006-01-25 09:25 PM


Beautiful Marge!
sandgrain
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19 posted 2006-02-01 09:54 AM


Hoping to get to all the poetic e-mails you've sent me real soon.  I've been gone for a bit.

This is just darling. Tickled me pink.

   Rae  

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20 posted 2006-02-01 05:28 PM


you are so gifted dear Marge, thank you for sharing your muses with us.

btw. can you lend me one of your muses, im still seeking mine.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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21 posted 2006-02-04 05:09 AM


awesome marge

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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