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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2006-01-21 06:23 AM


Tide pounding,
The Earth's tears flowing to land
And sounding
With pounding
Of its heartbeat on the sand;
It's twilight,
Almost night,
A couple walks hand in hand
Wordless speech
In tides reach
Then they just stop still and stand
Heart pounding,
The moonlight does all it can.

Gloom


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-01-21 08:42 AM


Wordless speech


like that very much..fits my mood

M

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with you
2 posted 2006-01-21 01:44 PM


this is beautiful
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2006-01-21 02:42 PM


"The moonlight does all it can."

I believe it does...

Enjoyed muchly Mr Gloom

m

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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