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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-20-2006 09:07 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


As if making up
For lost time

All the snow
Rushing down


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 01-21-2006 12:33 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


Your poetry is so frugal and simple it entrances me John. You cut life down to its bare bones. Beautiful work.


OwlSA
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2 posted 01-21-2006 12:47 AM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Agree with The Lady.  It's not just the images you create, it's the way of thinking behind the images.

- Owl
ecrivan
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my own state


3 posted 01-21-2006 12:59 AM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

making up for lost time...it all gets lost eventually somewhere...

Sunshine
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4 posted 01-21-2006 09:11 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Excellent imagery!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 01-22-2006 09:23 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 01-22-2006 09:38 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

This poem made me think....
which is a good thing.
Hugs,
Ethel
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7 posted 04-23-2007 01:09 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

this world does need be cleaned deligently.


beautiful poem.
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