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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-20 06:46 PM


Not personal, based on motel life

Dave

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Where did understanding go met you a few times
Scatty who was scatty but you professed all times
When a woman smiles you mentally check the score
Was it something I did, or didn't was it before or future

Was I warm when I met you was I feeling dead
Was that I really knew you or just facade instead
Was it that I loved you on such short notice
Did I just have a day and edged onto nonsense

Did I meet you again and again in a hotel
Did I never meet but just a motel yowtel

What is the secret to "I dont want success"
When I needed my beans cooked
And you cleaned the hotel microwave

Did I
Ever tell you
I had a feeling for you

Yes I did
But
I have more respect

Than to excuse myself
And my thoughts

And to
Use you

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
kevinbrianwright
Junior Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 35
NYC
1 posted 2006-01-20 06:54 PM


well crafted, great write

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-01-20 08:15 PM



Scattered sense, is what this is....

and it likes me!


Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-01-20 08:41 PM


Thanks Kevin

Sunshine

Hope things are going well for you

I have dropped into something - Senior guy building a whole industry almost for a consultancy.

You get torn between knowing you can do and wanting not to.

I'm not ready to write but it is creeping up on my

I really hope everything is going well for you Sunshine

Dave

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
4 posted 2006-01-22 10:10 PM


like you say much of what we do is use and throw away...


ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
5 posted 2006-01-22 10:10 PM


like you say much of what we do is use and throw away...


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2006-01-24 06:18 PM


Enjoyed...James
MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2006-01-30 10:40 PM


enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
8 posted 2006-01-31 06:18 PM


Thanks all

I Need to book the next hotel

Dave

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