Sir Yesterday the Knight of Remorse (from a challenge phrase)

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Sir Yesterday the Knight of Remorse (from a challenge phrase)

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2006-01-20 06:02 PM

regret sometimes kisses
the back of my hand
like an apologetic knight
no longer charming or grand

Sir Yesterday is the name
He’s known me well for years
He’s sorry, oh so sorry,
For my remorseful tears

He lingers long emboldened
By the darkness of my soul
His mocking smile confirms
That he has reached his goal

This knight of the shadowy realm
Never heeds my humble plea
To break the bond of remorse
And allow me to be free.

**Thanks Juju! I used your phrase first! It's been a long time since I felt like writing!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-01-20 06:11 PM

PoetdeVine~
This was sure worth waiting for ... what wonderful use of such a tender phrase~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Jamie
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Blue Heaven

2 posted 2006-01-21 11:33 AM

Enjoyed as always Sharon.

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2006-01-21 01:43 PM

Now you know I liked it and the graphic, my, my!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2006-01-21 07:07 PM

Thank you all...the ole muse is a bit rusty so we have to try her out gently!!

Juju
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In your dreams

5 posted 2006-01-31 02:55 PM

thank you, I am honored that you chose mine, esspecailly first.

-Juju

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* Juju *
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suthern

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6 posted 2006-02-01 01:43 PM

This is the perfect poem for me to read on a day filled with remorse, regret... and utter bafflement at the transgressions I've managed to achieve. *S*

It's great to read you again, Devine One!

The Lady
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The Southwest

7 posted 2006-02-01 02:39 PM

Beautiful poem!

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