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kevinbrianwright
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since 2006-01-19
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0 posted 2006-01-20 05:31 PM


Copyright Kevin Brian Wright 2006

Beauteous, how this young Venus lays, bare
with an appetite for sensual grace. Her open canals, sweetly caressing her celestial breasts, a body built to commit nothing but a gentle sin Her revealing eyes call me..come here my sacred lover, as cupid strings up his bow of mysterious love. Her melting bliss turns hearts to liquid, a heavenly maiden that draws out ones maddest desires. Her fragrant lure, folded in her warm embrace, carried by her infectious smile. Haunts my dreams, O' let me be your unbound interpreter of passion to your lips, the hands that plays the keys with the fullest music of every smooth caress of your milky body in this blissful state of ecstasy.

Kevin Brian Wright

© Copyright 2006 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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1 posted 2006-05-16 06:38 PM


perhaps a more defined layout might help this piece

Beauteous, how this young Venus lays,
bare with an appetite for sensual grace.
Her open canals, sweetly caressing her celestial breasts,
a body built to commit nothing but a gentle sin
Her revealing eyes call me..come here my sacred lover,
as cupid strings up his bow of mysterious love.
Her melting bliss turns hearts to liquid,
a heavenly maiden that draws out ones maddest desires.
Her fragrant lure, folded in her warm embrace,
carried by her infectious smile.
Haunts my dreams,
O' let me be your unbound interpreter of passion to your lips,
the hands that plays the keys with the fullest music
of every smooth caress of your milky body
in this blissful state of ecstasy.

Pauline
Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28
Island in the Sun...
2 posted 2006-05-16 06:58 PM


Your words are really beautiful...

do them justice by making it easier to read...

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