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jody5
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0 posted 2006-01-20 05:17 PM


When I need love, I can see all the good in you
Waiting for me to make my dreams alive.
I opened my eyes and started beliving in myself
Becomming free of the bondage you had over me.
I opened myself to the truth.
I saw it was you who set me free to be me.
No longer a tree standing still in the light of night.I came alive to the dreams you invoked.
When I need love, the good in you wakes me up
and my dreams become real.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-01-20 08:33 PM


Kimberly~

'I opened myself to the truth.
I saw it was you who set me free to be me'


And He has put your feet upon the pathway He would have you take~

Write it gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Bodger
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2 posted 2006-01-20 08:36 PM


Something that I feel should take years of life and maturity to write

Your words I feel are quality

dave

jody5
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3 posted 2006-01-20 09:14 PM


Marge that is quite a compliment comming from you, your work is so touching and inspireing. Dave thank you I wrote that many years ago and wanted to share it here.  Actually I believe God wrote it through me but it came straight out of my heart.


Fee
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4 posted 2006-01-21 06:54 PM


This is beautiful.... Lost for words.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

jody5
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5 posted 2006-01-21 07:17 PM


Thanks Fee,  That to me is a true compliment.


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-01-24 06:23 PM


Enjoyed....James
RedStoneEB
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7 posted 2006-01-25 05:28 AM


Everyone needs love and need to do it for themselves you can't give advice they never follow it they must learn to cope with the path of love themselves
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2006-01-25 10:36 AM


"No longer a tree standing still in the light of night.I came alive to the dreams you invoked."

~ Strikingly beautiful! Love can be grand and can make us become more than we ever dreamed we could be!


EA

jody5
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9 posted 2006-01-25 04:56 PM


James, Thank you. RedstoneEB and earth angel Thank you both for your sharing and your insight.  Earth Angel I am glad you appreciated my poem It came from deep inside my soul.  I wrote it during my divorce.


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