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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-01-20 11:25 AM


inconceivable energy

enigmatic inattention, surrounded
by the daily swipe of sunlight,
tremendous total kinetics
hanging onto the belly of soul
with talons of a
quilted true mastermind,
that
intravenously struts a wonder
traveling through veins flowing in
circular motion
of cozy hemmed afternoons

making some unknown scent of interest
feathered with a hushed voice
of faithful white haired shadows

mouthing the words,
“skin of milk, to sentiment
theme of all spirit
created by me, in conduct
truly amorous castle”

stretching into noon-tide rooms
drafting dawn with a badge

of aquamarine golds, offering to
lend loyal abundance…

to the psyche, to the essence
sacred domains encouraging
a journey in poem…

great statures of modesty
learning to achieve ourselves

thus sojourned in a consummation
of unrivaled amplification

abide controlling thoughts
from a womb of moisture

exempt from necessity
to a realm
beyond

may i touch the odor of this charity?

this thing of intrinsic qualities
devouring ego like a pool
within
pools,
within pools

there are no words
to think about
only partaking
of the idea midst

the seclusion of this forest
a place of future age

my sand grains,
my sand grains
far greater molecules
declare a world

immeasurable noon-day
merits fruitarian’s pearl

inconceivable????

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-01-20 12:07 PM


LeeJ
"inconceivable????" Only if you think it is.
Good morning sweet.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-01-20 03:14 PM


Lee J:

Your thoughts are too deep in this write for me.  But one verse sticks to my ribs like oatmeal:

"there are no words
to think about
only partaking
of the idea midst"

Beautiful vision.

JL


Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2006-01-20 03:19 PM


I'm always blown away with the amazing images you portray.

M xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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