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A Day
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A Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Day I start my day a mundane way My footsteps of a hollow move A pantomime of yesterday Weights the time and marks the grove It’s only when I seek my bed And fly my castle in the sky I join the living and undead A place I live and cannot die I am a knight in wonders world And ruling over my domain Imaginations flag unfurls A mighty king like Charlemagne I wave my scepter in the air Rule my reign a Fables Eden To fix illusion all I dare Next to me my queen and maiden It’s true I swore a marriage oath And she’s my queen the queen of both |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
me thinks you should try something completely different today, something unlike Sy...but for Sy... truly remarkable you are Hugs and happy Weekend |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A pantomime of yesterday ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the premise and intent of that single line...all it conjurs and encompasses is cooler than a mere moth has words for... ya blow me mind with your wisdom rhymes.  yer so kewl  *ww*    If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you for the read and comment. Have a good one sweety. JM, Slim pickings today, LOL. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sweet dreaming, Sy! Understand this well. ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Enjoyed the comment, thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah... now write for us of seashores and lonely shells...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Only if you walk with me on the beach. LOL |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I wave my scepter in the air Rule my reign a Fables Eden To fix illusion all I dare Next to me my queen and maiden It’s true I swore a marriage oath And she’s my queen the queen of both Awwww, Seymour, this is so sweet. Hug your queen for me!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel You are sweet, thank you dear. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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LifeSinger Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25Kentucky, USA |
awwww, SY your queen should be proud to sit next to you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LifeSinger I hope so. LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a queen would be proud to sit next to you My spirit will rise |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I'd make a good knight loved by all with the chain of women running behind my horse "O! knight kiss me" then i'd have my amazing sword that i would be masterful with |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RedStoneEB I've already changed my sword for a plow share. LOL Thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I wave my scepter in the air Rule my reign a Fables Eden To fix illusion all I dare Next to me my queen and maiden" Splendid poem! Lucky queen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you my lady. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you sweety. |
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