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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-01-20 06:06 AM





Fact Is I Worry Too Much


You said you had issues
Yes I have also had a few
Fact is I worry too much
But then you always knew

If I had caused any issue
Then I think I should know
Since your sketchy reply
My mind is sent to and fro

A sorry ass you did admit
While trying to humour me
At least I heard from you
Thank you for your apology

Although you shut me out
One day you might explain
Still you left me to guess
So I shall worry once again


Hope ©2006
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kevinbrianwright
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1 posted 2006-01-20 06:14 AM


fantastic write

skyshine
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2 posted 2006-01-20 09:38 AM


I can relate--I can't remember a time in my life when I did not worry too much, so I know what you're going through...

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Bodger
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3 posted 2006-01-21 04:51 PM


In touch in feeling in bottom level feeeeeeelingggggg

You  took flows that never ever hit the ground

When you waggled it you did for one man

Get back to writing your real words that enliven

That real soul

I always think of you as the Carib movement when something moves

Wrong country, wrong style

But the image is there

Dave Page

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4 posted 2006-01-21 06:13 PM


Goodness, Hope, I know about the "worrying".
It seems I do far too much of it!!
Good writing!
Hugs,
Ethel

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