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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-01-19 02:32 PM



And It's Only Thursday

peering through the blinds
afraid to walk the shadows
I sit wishing the day gone by

pounding hurts my ears
senses keeping me awake
to words revised

surrounding me with cold,
the gray side of the sun,
wishing I could sing...

those loss of words


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-01-19 03:37 PM


eventually, it becomes Friday.
Wishing you some sunshine.

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2006-01-19 04:01 PM


What is a Thursday, but just another day
To be peered at though blinds or curtains drawn
A casually observed before tossed away
As we dutifully, woefully just schlep on
To a weekend or week beginning
The circle seems never ending

But hark
What light through yon window breaks
Dang
I forgot to close those blinds

Gloom

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-01-19 05:11 PM


*giggling at Gloom*

"surrounding me with cold,
the gray side of the sun,
wishing I could sing...

those loss of words"

I know this feeling Maureen...
Hang on, it's almost the weekend.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

steavenr
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4 posted 2006-01-19 05:29 PM


wow..,haven't we all been there at one time or the other...love the words:

"afraid to walk the shadows
I sit wishing the day gone by"

been there...done that...couldn't afford the t-shirt...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2006-01-19 07:10 PM


I walked  "3 miles in my shoes" trying to get through Thursday into Friday~~~

sighing a thanks
M

SmartChick
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6 posted 2006-01-19 07:52 PM


Well, just hang on. Tomorrow is Friday.
Constance
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7 posted 2006-01-19 08:26 PM


I've started calling Thursday, "pre Friday", it makes me feel better. This was very good indeed!

smiles,
toes

shades of paul
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8 posted 2006-01-19 08:50 PM


Ahh yes,a good write. Bring on Friday !..paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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