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I Vacilate
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I Vacilate |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Vacillate I vacillate when near extreme When looking for the core of mean Chasing rainbows with a tear Living with the taste of fear I falter right before the door I fear the entrance to the core I fear the feeling of let go Of everything I have and know To fall into unknowns abyss To trade the sun for sheer darkness To burn into a pile of ash All that is and think is trash I feel the sting of daily death On each and every daily breath Yet in the dreams of nightly fly I wish the sun and only sigh I hover like a bell in chime The melody of father time |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
This is incredible. I'll have to read more of your work sometime- because I really enjoyed this. I liked- "I feel the sting of daily death On each and every daily breath Yet in the dreams of nightly fly I wish the sun and only sigh" Thank you for this poem |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the melody of father time... Excellent prose this morning sir, enjoyed and appreciated. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To fall into unknowns abyss To trade the sun for sheer darkness To burn into a pile of ash All that is and think is trash I feel the sting of daily death On each and every daily breath Yet in the dreams of nightly fly I wish the sun and only sigh I hover like a bell in chime The melody of father time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and you? youre the Godfather of rhyme divine   *ww*    |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
No hint of vacillation in this write. Sy you met it head on. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DejaEntendu Enjoyed your comment, thank you. LeeJ Thank you and good morning sweet. JM, Miss you scorpio You would't have a bandaid the size of my head. LOL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
your vacillating is a great balancing act  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun, You noticed, LOL Thanks for the read and reply. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I really need to get in here and read you more often... Love this, Sy... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Glad this popped back up as I missed it on the first go-round. Sy, may you continue to "vascillate" for many, many years to come. .....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you for the pop and read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Thank you my friend. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Seymour, your thoughts take life in without waver, savor in moments and welcome more! Such is life. I love your poetry because of this...your heart has eyes which lets your pen speak. Thank you for sharing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy Another Klassy answer, thank you. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I feel the sting of daily death On each and every daily breath" great poem. I think all life is but a moment in between the swing and strike. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox You are right, thank you my friend scorpio Each reply is a fiber in my shawl. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always get me with your last two lines incredible piece! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"I vacillate when near extreme When looking for the core of mean Chasing rainbows with a tear Living with the taste of fear" I sure know what you mean, Sy!! Well said!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You always say that, thank you. Martie I was hoping most people would, thank you sweet. |
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