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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-01-19 12:20 PM


Life as a coffee shop II


I go to Starbucks a lot lately
Mostly to reminisce and dream
Where I come from it’s where people go
Until something better comes their way

Many friends come and go
And still I am left drinking my coffee
Watching from the window
As people migrate across the street

The store is empty
Though the cars out side
And the decorations
Appease the eyes

So I drink my coffee
And I drink it strait
Sugar doesn’t make it sweeter
And cream makes me fat.


Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

© Copyright 2006 Juju - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2006-01-19 01:30 AM


Good one, Juju.  I can see a lot of growth in your writing.   ...jo
shades of paul
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2 posted 2006-01-19 08:30 AM


Can't mask the flavor so I,ll take mine black...Thank You........paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-01-19 08:58 AM


love Starbucks and your writing...very well done...
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-01-19 04:52 PM


enjoyed sipping some java with you, juju
Juju
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5 posted 2006-01-20 10:17 AM


Thank you. I am glad you like my poem.  Kinda down lately, but I will pull out of it.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

kevinbrianwright
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6 posted 2006-01-21 06:23 AM


This was good!!!! Nice one!

Kevin Brian Wright

Huan Yi
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7 posted 2006-01-21 02:11 PM



"So I drink my coffee
And I drink it strait
Sugar doesn’t make it sweeter
And cream makes me fat."

The incidental manner made it worthwhile . . .

John

RedStoneEB
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8 posted 2006-01-21 02:26 PM


Guess i should sit in some coffee shop and hope someone like you talks to me
D.Lester Young
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9 posted 2006-01-21 02:51 PM


Nice touch to this.
Juju
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10 posted 2006-01-23 03:30 PM


Thank you for your replies.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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