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icebox
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0 posted 2006-01-18 05:11 AM




The world will shake today,
as pricey little shining children
in ten thousand dollar suits
playing at grown up will cry and wail
and try to run away;
reporters circling will hope to graze on carrion
as they conjure Chicken Little
for the timid and the greedy
while the truly needy haven’t got the time
to pay attention to the news,
their daily views on life are always simple,
will there be a bowl of rice for their kids to share today.

©2006 by icebox



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-01-18 05:53 AM


while the truly needy haven’t got the time
to pay attention to the news,
their daily views on life are always simple,
will there be a bowl of rice for their kids to share today.


perfect, and whoa, what an impact this leaves in the mind....

so sad, that it is a reality many face every day.  

Thank you for this.

Nan
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2 posted 2006-01-18 08:32 AM


Indeed - There's something to be said for hermitage...
littlewing
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3 posted 2006-01-18 09:00 PM


Is this why I don't watch tv?

Gosh, I can always come right here when I need truth.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-01-18 10:10 PM




"as pricey little shining children
in ten thousand dollar suits
playing at grown up will cry and wail
and try to run away;"

How true. I really enjoyed this.

steavenr
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5 posted 2006-01-18 10:56 PM


great title...fabulous write...well done...so VERY well done...!!!! applause!
Honeybunch
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6 posted 2006-01-19 12:50 PM


It's always the simplest things that make us the happiest.  The "news" is a killer.  Those addicted to it perhaps the dispensers of a silent doom that creeps unnoticed into one's mind.  As we think, so we are.  I always enjoy reading you.  
iliana
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7 posted 2006-01-19 01:59 AM



Well, you were right.  It shook, but then it bounced back.  Your concerns are echoed by me.  The poor and enslaven are left behind...it's always been the way of things, hasn't it.  I do watch the news and read.  Used to feel like I was better off without watching TV, but I find it is a necessary "participation" these days.  Although, once all this digital conversion takes place and I can be watched through the TV, I may change my mind...lol.  Appreciated your words, Mr. C.   ...jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (01-19-2006 02:55 AM).]

RedStoneEB
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8 posted 2006-01-19 05:03 AM


Always looking at different things they never do compare
icebox
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in the shadows
9 posted 2006-01-19 09:38 AM


Thank you all for your comments and thoughts and for the time it takes to share them.  



serenity blaze
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10 posted 2006-01-19 03:19 PM


You have such a way of summing things up, that I sometimes have trouble knowing what to say to you. I feel like anything I'd say would be redundant, as I am convinced you are already in my head.



Just letting you know that I was here, and I enjoyed. (Actually I'm letting everybody else know--because you already knew. )


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Gaia
11 posted 2006-01-19 03:29 PM


Yes, indeed. Those without food often are also without any shiny electronic gadgets, without the luxury of time to stay 'on top of the news'
Kaoru
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12 posted 2006-01-19 04:17 PM


Wonderful writing, as always.
Martie
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13 posted 2006-01-19 04:32 PM


icebox

"The world will shake today,"

I hope you're not predicting an earthquake in California.   

OwlSA
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14 posted 2006-01-20 01:42 PM


Excellent, icebox!

Giggles, Martie (as long as there is no earthquake!).

- Owl

Dark Angel
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15 posted 2006-01-20 03:12 PM


You always display magnificent work Icey

Enjoyed

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2006-01-25 11:54 AM


I wasn't even finished with the first line when I had the very distinct feeling you knew...know things before...

Well done Icy.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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