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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-01-18 02:29 AM




The Driver Came With Style

Stroking across keypads
With fingers appealing
Being switched on daily
Lighting up with feeling

With hard drive humming
Their keystroke urging
They enter your software
Feelings start merging

As I accessed more ram
Plug -ins are released
Attaching the application
Mega bytes increased

Layed upon spreadsheet
With smile on my lips
We shared in some java
Ate the computer chips

Explored my compatibility
In software connections
The driver came with style
By unzipping affections


Hope ©2006
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ice
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1 posted 2006-01-18 04:29 AM


Whoever said that electronics cannot be sensual, never read this...

As I read this I recalled EE's "She being brand new"...love both of them...

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Startime55
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2 posted 2006-01-18 11:08 AM


WOW...Hope you sure have a way with words and making electronic have a romantic twist sure brought a smile to my face...well done...**big hugs**
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3 posted 2006-01-18 12:02 PM


Hope without a doubt, your best ever!  So creative and actually very, very funny in a senual sort of way.  LOL, you go girl!

"There's nothing worse that being an aging young person!" - Richard Pryor
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HopeS
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4 posted 2006-01-18 12:07 PM


Thank you so much for your comments in reply , glad you could see the fun aspect , it always helps to keep a sense of humour !!

Hope

Constance
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5 posted 2006-01-18 02:39 PM


Loved this! So very clever. Lady, your entendres are peeking out in the coyest way!

giggles,
Constance

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