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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-01-17 09:44 PM



‘Neath swirls and twirls of a starlit night
Vincent’s trees dance in rarified light.
Hearts swoon to sit ‘neath such a moon,
while paint brushes take flight on canvas at noon,
crows fly darkly over the goldenrod fields,
as in hands of despair, the somber paint yields
itself in a blaze of wonder, of passionate resolve,
life’s color from brushstroke on canvas does dissolve

and who knows where the crow goes
as Vincent trudges slowly down the road
to Arles and beyond, his heart glows
of life, love, and thoughts of his God
the God he knows has forsaken him
or so ‘twas a fleeting thought he brushed away
one stormy day when all seemed lost.

Life beyond repair...but He was there,
in each stroke of genius that bled itself true.
And Vincent, I am there beside you,
in depth of feeling, within your hue.
But sadly, I am way too late to sit for you.


© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-17 11:34 PM


very, very nice. And I especially love the unexpected wink at the end!

smiles,
constance

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2 posted 2006-01-18 12:30 PM


thank you, for spending some time here tonight 'neath Vincent's starry night!
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3 posted 2006-01-18 04:11 PM


Ah Kacy...
Now I have Starry Starry Night playing in my mind..
that's okay, I love the piece,
and your poem!
Great imagery....
hugs, Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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4 posted 2006-01-18 07:31 PM


Lovely to read, it flows magnificantly vincent would be proud

Julie

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5 posted 2006-01-18 08:47 PM


Oh, Kacy . . . not too late . . .

When I was reading of the painting I believe you speak of, or one of them, was when he was in an asylum and oddly enough that is the only place he felt peace.

Meaning he was understood there, not bothered.  That is so tragic and messed up.  
The painting with the crows over the field?  
A lot of people did not see that as Vincent painted, nor as you write of, for to him, they were foreboding.

This is a beautiful tribute and you, m'dear would be a most perfect model.

What a fine write, an amazing poetess.
(He would have even smiled, I bet!)

I could talk about this forever . . .


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6 posted 2006-01-18 09:00 PM


thanks for reading Julie!
and Sue? it's obvious you've been reading of Vincent. I believe he was bipolar. Can't explain easily why I feel this, but it's always been an assumption of mine. I haven't really read mucha bout his daily life, but his art has always gone straight to the inner core of me, and to write of him, is sometimes, to write of myself.  But my hands could never ever hope to do what his did with a paintbrush.

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7 posted 2006-01-18 09:12 PM


Oh, I just read "Tormented Genius"  a great book, sad life, wrong time for Vincent.

I disagree though about the painting.  

You just did that up there.

*grin*

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8 posted 2006-01-18 09:17 PM


I've never read that book, hadn't even heard of it 'till you mentioned it recently. It's now on my list, thank you!
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9 posted 2006-01-20 01:44 PM



Superb read here.
Much enjoyed it.

:-)

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10 posted 2006-01-20 01:48 PM


Oh, its amazing, you must read it.  Very sad but I side with Vincent comepletely.  Makes one wonder exactly WHO the crazy people ARE.
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11 posted 2006-01-20 02:22 PM


Enjoyed
touched me, since he is one of my favorite painters,
but that figures,
being my own tormented soul.

Gloom

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12 posted 2006-01-20 03:00 PM


What a pity he can't read your poem and our responses and see how we all melt into his paintings?  Perhaps he can feel it.

- Owl

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13 posted 2006-01-20 03:06 PM


Love this Kacy

into my library

maree

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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14 posted 2006-01-25 11:52 AM


Oh Kacy, this is very, very cool!!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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15 posted 2006-01-25 12:02 PM





I had the vision of Vincent van Gogh's painting "Starry Night" as I was reading your lovely poem. Then I saw in your reply that it was indeed his painting on which you based your verbally artistic poem.

To sit for such a master, would have been sublime!


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16 posted 2006-01-25 04:13 PM




Awesome work.



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17 posted 2006-01-25 09:23 PM


Kacy, this is my favorite Vincent poem yet!  It is a brilliant insight and pulls me right in to the picture.   ...jo
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18 posted 2006-01-25 09:23 PM


Oops, I meant to save this.
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19 posted 2006-01-25 10:06 PM


a lovely, lovely read.
much enjoyed. xxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

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20 posted 2006-01-26 03:33 PM


aw, you poets are all so kind to me!
There are so many inspiring artists out there, and each one brings me to different places in my heart and mind. Vincent has, and always will be, the one who speaks to me the most often. But I would also love to pick flowers with Monet, hang out at a luncheon party with Renoir et al.

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