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The Garden
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The Garden |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
The Garden There's life deep in the garden a garden of rot and decay there's life within the garden but it may or may not survive There's hope amongst the hopeless like a fire in the eyes there's hope filling the hopeless but it warmth just will not spread for there's hate controlling the hateful who's numbers seem to grow there's hate destroying hateful won't let the life to grow the hate eclipses the hopeful as disallusioned power falls the hate will burn the peaceful as the heavens shed their tears |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Stark contrasts within this poem emphasize the point you're making well. I have to keep hoping tho', and I believe in the end, all will be made right. |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
I like the way you wrote this poem. Yes, there are a lot of hateful people out there. But hope endures. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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