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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-01-16 02:13 PM



They use me
They abuse me
in the end they
mean nothing to
me.

The tears shed off
my porceline face
are bitter sweet

The hands you place
upon not only
me but my very being
has finally broken me

For I can't even trust
my true friend where
does that leave me.


unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2006 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2006-01-27 10:12 AM


.... unedited ....


           somethings are left for ourselves to finish,
            to be made our own ....


              liked the direction you took this

              
          ... what is left may never be right
                 but it is the beginning of who we really are ...


Ct

RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
2 posted 2006-01-27 10:13 AM


Its weird how the world isn't the world in the human connections human connections is what you talk about but we always get back to your like the rest its abit like that
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