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dickiegreenleaf Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 10Canada |
the tender gaze crossed the room like light drops of sun ran down her cheeks as he touched her arm rose of her hair flowered onto his back as they met and they kissed he awoke earlier than usual and looked upon her sleepless form for what seemed like an enternity he studied when her eyes lifted and diamond like sparkled blinding him as she spoke it deafened him of all but her voice and nothing around could distract from her beauty it was flashes of heaven from the depths of his hell she'd saved his damnation |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
I believe that no poem can be summarized in a few simple words but if it could be done then I think this poem could be summarized as "love in it's quintessential form" |
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mighty mouth Junior Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 24Missouri, USA |
this was not at all where i thought that poem was going. such a great ride! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! fabulous first post, I enjoyed. Welcome to Passions, you'll enjoy it here I'm sure. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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dickiegreenleaf Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 10Canada |
Thanks for kind words A good welcome  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions, dickiegreenleaf! This certainly qualifies for a passionate write! Enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful view to share. Thanks for the lift! Welcome to Passions. ThisDiamond |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That is an intriguing name that you have, my fellow Canadian! Of course, we in Canada are known for our green maple leaf! lol But where did the Dickie come from? lol I'm just playing with you, Dickie! Welcome aboard! You are off to a great start with this poem! You appear to be a man who appreciates the beauty of a woman! ~ and the one you have written of so sweetly appears to be good for you! Be happy! Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS DYLAN! I very much enjoyed your entrance post. Looking forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Welcome. Can't wait to see more poems by you |
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dickiegreenleaf Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 10Canada |
actually earth angel dickie greenleaf is the character played by Jude Law in "the talented mr. ripley" which is my fave film and Jude is my fave actor. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lol Something in my little head told me that I was way off target, but I was in one of my playful, silly moods! lol Hope you enjoy yourself on these blue pages!  EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
dickiegreenleaf There is so much obvious love in this poem that it made me smile. Welcome to Passions! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A great entrance poem and by the way even at my age, Jude Law is also one of my favorite actors too. Welcome to Passions.  from a fellow Canuck! |
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dickiegreenleaf Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 10Canada |
exceptional acting defies generations |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I enjoyed your first post. And I'm looking for more. believe in what your heart feels... |
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