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poe
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since 2004-09-06
Posts 180
Heading to China

0 posted 2006-01-15 11:06 PM


First I would like to state that I am leaving Passions to do human rights work in China.
The reason that my poems speak as though I am already dead, is because I am an ill person. There is no need for me to discuss what my ailment is. This is why those poems were worded the way they were.

Now I would like to thank the people that emailed me or responded to my poems before they were deleted. It is people such as yourselves that shows that this world truly is a bueatiful place.
I may not have gotten a chance to read your responses.
I would like each of you to know, that I am doing fine and thank you for your kindness.

Thank You Nancy/Enchantress
Thank You Kacy/Midnitesun
Thank You Lauren/Greeneyes
Thank You Diana/OwlSA
Thank You Marge Tindal
Thank You nakdthoughts
Thank You iliana

My Mouth stapled shut for the words that I chose to convey
It seems that we have come to an odd point
Never really reading the words for what they were
Too busy reading between the lines to see what is in plain view
Has everything turned into an episode of CSI
Sometimes a rose is nothing more then a rose
I was told I was condoning suicide when I never even said that
I had stated that I had contemplated the thought
Am I suppose to stand up here and lie to you
It was a thought in my mind and I moved past it
If anything I was showing that it should not be the final choice you make
Maybe if I had labeled those poems Multiple Sclerosis or Cancer
They would be still here for you to read
My death will come early, but not by my own hands
They stole the words of encouragement that others left for me
If it was not for the mass flood of emails I recieved I would never have known
I sit back and think that anger should be filling me
I did not even get a chance to copy those words to my own notebook
I guess it is like I said
Some call me preacher man
Others call me an idealist fool
No matter what they choose to call me
In my heart I know what I do is right
No matter how many times I get silenced inthis world
You have to believe, I am going to keep moving on
Because after the darkest night always comes a brighter day
Dear poe,

We regret to inform you that your poem, "Smile," as well as "Last Words" have
been removed because they both violate the posted guidelines of our forum. We
remind you that we do not allow poems that depict or glorify suicide, violence,
or the harming of oneself or others. If you wish to edit the offending content,
and repost it, you may.

It would be irresponsible of us to condone postings that show suicide as a valid
choice to susceptible members who may be influenced by it. Though you may be
expressing this as a mere third party issue, and not one from your own personal
experience, we are not in a position to discern the sincerity behind your words.
If this poem does reflect an issue that you are dealing with, we are not
unsympathetic to your feelings, and would like to offer you some options in the
links below

If you were experiencing severe stomach aches and wanted relief, you would seek
professional help. These feelings that you are expressing may be symptoms that
also require professional assistance before you can feel better. We strongly
advise that you do just that... Seek professional help.

You also need the support of others. If your family is unaware, tell them. If
you feel you can't, talk to your friends, a school counselor, a member of the
clergy, or staff at a service center in your community.

You will find much more information, support, and places where you can express
yourself at the following links:
http://www.suicide-helplines.org/  http://suicidehotlines.com/  http://teenadvice.about.com/mbody.htm  http://teenadvice.about.com/teens/teenadvice/cs/helplines/index.htm  http://depression.about.com/teens/depression/mbody.htm  http://www.teenadviceonline.org  http://teenpoetry.studentcenter.org/  http://www.teen-online.com

We wish you the best, and hope to see you posting soon, within our guidelines,
of course.

Sunshine - Moderator/ Passions in Poetry

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2006 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-01-15 11:17 PM


you already know what I might write
hugging you tight

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-01-15 11:49 PM


Glad you decided to keep writing.  I'm wishing you the very best in your quest for human rights in China, poe.   ...jo
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-01-15 11:54 PM


I wish you well in your philanthropic endeavors in China! ~ and please find the time to write poems on your memories in the making!

Love & Light,
EA



OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2006-01-16 12:18 PM


I, too, wish you well in China and know that will do much good, second by second.  The tiny things are just that bit more important than the big things.  

I also wish you courage, determination, happiness, wisdom, the ability to turn to others when you need to, smiles, peace and many, many miracles.  You are worthy of all these things and you deserve them.

Hugs
Owl

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