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LifeSinger
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since 2006-01-15
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Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2006-01-15 05:20 PM



Im new, and probably one of the youngest people on here, so here goes.

EVERMORE TO WANDER

I watch the figure fade slowly
the loss of a freind and enemy
lying in the plush softness of guilt
listening to the clock tick
seconds, minutes, life
away into the black hole that is time
strolling down the streets of foriegn images
white walls stained with splotches of
pain and sorrow
and my thoghts revolve around you
around your arrival
around my final revenge
strangely satysfying
walking in the alley of my unknown subconsious
evermore to wander.

© Copyright 2006 Haley Edwards - All Rights Reserved
littleJas
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since 1999-12-22
Posts 39
Australia
1 posted 2006-01-15 05:24 PM


What a great first post, welcome I hope you enjoy posting here as I do  

Jas

LifeSinger
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since 2006-01-15
Posts 25
Kentucky, USA
2 posted 2006-01-15 05:28 PM


Thanks, I'm sure I will.
whiskey
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3 posted 2006-01-15 05:37 PM


Hello and welcome to pip, wonderful first post very nicely written. Looking forward to reading some more, hope you enjoy it here  

Julie

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
4 posted 2006-01-15 07:40 PM


A GOOD FIRST POST,WELCOME TO PIP...PAUL

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
5 posted 2006-01-15 07:40 PM


Welcome to Passions !
Enjoy yourself here.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2006-01-15 08:18 PM


welcome to Passions
I enjoyed the way you entered. Wandering around in here can be great fun, not to mention educational.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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7 posted 2006-01-15 08:23 PM


first, welcome...second, this poem is exceptionally good...keep up the excellent writing (regardless of your age)...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2006-01-15 08:33 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very nice entrance you have made here.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
9 posted 2006-01-15 11:13 PM




Great work. Thanks for sharing.

poe
Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180
Heading to China
10 posted 2006-01-15 11:18 PM


Great poem, keep up the great work.
Never let your pen get away from you.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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11 posted 2006-01-16 02:36 AM


BRAVO!
Great first post, can't wait to see more from you.

You'll enjoy the great circle of friends which is passions.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



openthoughts
Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94
Where the child can be free
12 posted 2006-01-16 03:11 AM


1) Age means nothing to the open mind when it comes to poetry
2) Welcome to passions...I'm new as well.  my first poem was posted merely an hour or two ago but i don't believe it got quite the warm welcome that yours did
3) Your poetry is beautiful and stricken with grief.  It actually bears a stricking resemblance to my writing style which was what jumped out in my mind when i first read it
4) You may be among the youngest but I doubt you ARE the youngest. I may rival you there.  My age may be concealed in my next poem

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
13 posted 2006-01-16 03:29 AM


You might be young, but you write with a seasoned touch!  Great first poem!  Welcome to Passions, LifeSinger.  ...jo
LifeSinger
Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25
Kentucky, USA
14 posted 2006-01-16 12:21 PM


Thanks, you guys,i appreciate the warm welcome ^^
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