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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Snow falls and disappears Almost as soon As it touches ground As much of life or dreams Ephemeral divertissements That no one then bothers To keep in mind And yet tonight For some reason of their own Having nothing to do with what is now Certain images reappear In a forest deer Silently move in shades of blue Light ripples on water Near a hidden shore The young woman her hair Free as she flies to her lover’s arms A winter halo Around the moon |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This....simply resonates...gives me a literal vibration. You absolutely put me there this time! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
don't understand why this one had so few comments...it is exquisite...beautiful use of words...gotta bump it back up... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You caught a sliver of silver here... thank you, John. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for adding to my Huan Yi art gallery of sensitivity! - Owl |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
winter,everything is cold even love is runing to the warm. |
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