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Aureole

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-15-2006 11:04 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Snow falls and disappears
Almost as soon
As it touches ground

As much of life or dreams
Ephemeral divertissements
That no one then bothers
To keep in mind

And yet tonight
For some reason of their own
Having nothing to do with what is now
Certain images reappear

In a forest deer
Silently move in shades of blue
Light ripples on water
Near a hidden shore

The young woman her hair
Free as she flies to her loverís arms

A winter halo
Around the moon


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


1 posted 01-15-2006 11:32 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

This....simply resonates...gives me a literal vibration. You absolutely put me there this time!
steavenr
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2 posted 01-18-2006 11:20 PM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

don't understand why this one had so few comments...it is exquisite...beautiful use of words...gotta bump it back up...
Sunshine
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3 posted 01-20-2006 08:24 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


You caught a sliver
of silver here...

thank you, John.

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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4 posted 01-20-2006 12:31 PM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Thank you for adding to my Huan Yi art gallery of sensitivity!

- Owl
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5 posted 04-23-2007 01:07 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

winter,everything is cold even love is runing to the warm.

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