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Familiar Fear?
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Familiar Fear? |
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EagletonDiva Member
since 2006-01-11
Posts 107 |
There is something familiar about your face I have seen somewhere before Should I know who you are? There is something familiar about your voice I have heard somewhere before Should I know who you are? There is something familiar about this fear I have felt once before Now I know who you are You are my demon, my nightmare You are the one who took my innocence Now I know who you are You have stolen my childhood, my dreams You are my destroyer I know you well I remember every stroke of your hand Even to the smallest demand I know you well I can still taste the bitter kisses And beating of my heart in my chest Should I hate you this much? I thought you were bigger Stronger somehow I guess you were then I thought you would be scarier Intimidating to me I guess you were then But not now Not any longer I don’t know you at all MWilson aka Lyn Eagleton 11/15/2001 |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
very insightful and well felt, i could hear the anger in your voice... well written chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
my emotions where really played with in this reading i had to read is agian aloud and it gave me shivers. keep going |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Your poem speaks loudly... and well. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Oh well we have all met this person... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
how very well written and so insightful...reminds me of a passage in the Book of Isaiah...but then, I digress...lovely write. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A very good poem I enjoyed very much....paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I could feel your strength building as I read! Powerful writing! |
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