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why ya can't out-hobo a gypsy (double entendre)
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why ya can't out-hobo a gypsy (double entendre) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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that ol jake he could dig hisself in deeper'n anyone furrowin freakin fields no one else would dare hitch just any ole ass to 'n that day he was harder 'n hotter 'n shovel spit she jus snuck up behind his sorry ass and says 'move on over, sunny boy i got three hungry mouths ta feed 'n yer blockin the dirt with yer dead plow' so jake, he addled off to his ditch-side tent still scratchin the surface of his waders that got 'em in over his head while watchin that redhead sway * |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interesting work here. This sounds like farming for shearers where you get paid by the number of sheep shorn and tagged by the end of the run. The competition is fierce. It sounds like the competition is fierce in this scene you've painted too. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
LMAO.....Kacy, you are a trip. And this rocks!!!! Come on over here 'round the fire, we got lots a stories still to tell..  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Fierce...yep. thanks for reading and commenting, Kethry! It's always a treat to get a reading from you. lol I had to  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I loved this, especially with that accent! I'm no authority on any American accent, but I could just hear you reading this, even though I don't know your voice! - Owl |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh I love this . . . Only you would outdo a hobo . . . I didnt know this was for the challenge, I would say you pottered out ever'body . . . *grin* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL, this is great, Kacy! Very much enjoyed...yes indeed!  ....jo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lol that there's some nice writing miss |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL... this is awesome, Kacy! You told the story perfectly... and I wanna hear more... *smile* "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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