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Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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0 posted 2006-01-14 12:16 PM



why i love her
thats easy to explain
with a single hug
she slays my pain

she makes me laugh
she has a loving heart
she lives in my very soul
and thats good for a start

when someone hurts her a wrath is in me
but with one word of cheer she makes me happy
i cant wholly explain what i feel
but since i met her i'm happier than a seal

when i see her my heart weeps tears of joy
we often poke fun at each other oh! such joy!
maybe one day we'll be together
but until that day comes
i give one simple sentance to say why i love her


because i choose to


-may the force be with you in poetry

[This message has been edited by Sharksbean (01-15-2006 03:05 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-01-14 12:19 PM


Well done.
TD

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2006-01-14 12:27 PM


Much enjoyed!   ...jo
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-01-14 12:47 PM


Those are good reasons, indeed, to love her!

As you love, so may you be loved!

You have a kind and loving heart, sb.


EA

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2006-01-15 01:24 AM


This was lovely my friend

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-01-15 01:29 AM



Good job.

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
6 posted 2006-01-15 12:49 PM


Such a wonderful poem, full of light and sparkle into this, thanks for sharing this, keep up the awesome poetry.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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