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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2006-01-13 03:56 PM



where is she now ?...
hidden with the night...
a star full of light...among the sky
my open heart is shy to her charm
somewhere in the mix of the world
we happen to stumble upon each other
both with eyes so pure
meeting with a passion of truth and
deeper meanings ....the reasons why,
it evolves into more than a dream
hoping she will comfort my wounded heart
and I shall give energy to the part of me
that has slept for so long
it seems to me i can just make the wait
forever in the rain
tears and memories of our past
a ghost writer of words
pulled for comparison of what it feels like
life is as much or as little ...what is
needed to be, experience gained through time
i will be close to the labyrinth
to use the love i have
the ride comes to the nearing end
to only join again
with a beautiful princess in this  
  
    
JDW III  

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor
and with crystal key in secrecy
he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien
( the adventure

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littlewing
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1 posted 2006-01-13 05:16 PM


*smiling*

sounds like you are altogether in the past, present and future (where most of us seem to be)

May she meet you there soon, James.

This is lovely.

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2006-01-13 05:19 PM


thanks little , i am pleased that you read and replyed too ,many blessings to you sweet little wing ~Jameso

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor
and with crystal key in secrecy
he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien
( the adventure

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-01-13 05:53 PM


Much enjoyed the read here wolfie.
Love the new pic too!
hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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4 posted 2006-01-13 06:01 PM


Very nice James - enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Bodger
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5 posted 2006-01-13 06:44 PM


I enjoyed this

It seemed just the right balance

Dave

OwlSA
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6 posted 2006-01-14 12:54 PM


May the sun shine through the rain and gently dry it into a rainbow, and may you find the pot of not gold, but happiness, and may the sun stay with you with just enough rain to make the flowers grow.  

Lovely poem, aujussy wolf.  Where does "aujussy" come from?  Does it mean something?  Or is it a name?  Or is it a combination of more than one name?

- Owl

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7 posted 2006-01-14 01:28 AM


Very lovely writing, James.   ...jo
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