Knowing The Ache, Of Not Know

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-01-13 03:25 PM

I have felt that ache
of knowing
that I can never
know
the feel, the touch
that would cause me
to reel...

to be all tied up inside..

and Yes,

I do hide from
the pain
of my desire

within this fire
shame does not burn;
but glowing embers
can't match this yearning...

churning in my soul~

I've written this
so that you will know

that I too, know
the ache
of 'not know'.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-13-2006 04:59 PM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2006-01-13 03:39 PM

I've felt that ache, too... and it can knock one to her knees, can't it? *S* You wrote it well, sweet lady!

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2006-01-13 04:23 PM

you certainly did write it well Donna.

~hugs~

sweetie
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2006-01-13 04:41 PM

Hey Bella, have missed you!

arghhh "to know the ache of not know"

sigh...

love your writes Bella

btw.. love your new pic too

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-01-14 08:47 AM

Isn't it just so,
that you are wise enough
to know what
you don't know?

"It matters not this distance now" from Yesterday's Love KRJ

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2006-01-14 03:56 PM

*sigh* how many of us have known that ...

and then He created the horse...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2006-01-14 06:23 PM

So many of us relate to this, but only Gentle Spirit can write a Gentle Spirit poem about it! Beautiful, sensitive and so very, painfully sad. I wish you happiness of at least other kinds.

- Owl

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2006-01-14 07:08 PM

This is beautiful Donna.

Made me feel like it was written for someone.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2006-01-18 05:57 AM

Hi everyone, and thanks so much for your responses and kindnesses. It means so much to me!

MUSEconnieSEconnie
Member

since 2006-02-28

Posts 74
california

9 posted 2006-03-05 11:04 PM

SO BEAUTIFULLY AND SIMPLY RENDERED. A FEELING THAT IS SO FAMILIAR. BRAVO!

I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2006-03-05 11:40 PM

So sad... well done.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2006-04-02 05:13 PM

good read

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2006-04-02 05:19 PM

WOW!! How did I mis this wonderful write?!!
Excellent Donna.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2006-04-02 07:01 PM

lately, myself, I've found some things are better left not known

but I do understand these feelings here

good to read you

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